Naruto: The Template System

With a Power unknown to the Ninja World, Kozuki travel's to the Ninja World and left a legend that... Read more
With a Power unknown to the Ninja World, Kozuki travel's to the Ninja World and left a legend that spread throughout generations. Collapse

System, Male Protagonist, Fanfiction, Naruto, Bleach, One Piece, Weak to Strong

Wow, what a dissapointment.

Alright ill write a review since no one else has. Well the idea of the novel is really good however its badly executed. Only pro to this novel is an interesting system. First of all the author makes shanks seem completely overpowered with only like 20% of his power. Like he killed a jonin at 5 which makes zero sense considering he can only slash a sword and doesnt use chakra. Then his team which is suppose to be 2 guys one girl, is two girls one guy and the girls literally just bootlick him. It feels like two useless baggage cheerleaders are around him instead of an actual team. Also the author makes the nine year old girls constantly blush around like a thirty year old reincarnated man. Like every interaction is just them blushing and him petting their heads. And then the author adds in their inner dialogue of just flattering the mc and how much they like him, which doesnt add to the story in any way. Then whenever they actually get into combat situations the girls are always like no you cant fight just leave it to us, which once again ruins the flow of the story. Like the mc has the strength of a kage at 9 and has two genins to take care of. Anyways other than sexualising underaged girls the author doesnt know the difference between knew and know and their and there. Then the interactions between his friends are extremely forced well one example is during the meet up thing before the war. like everyone meets up to see eachother off then he sneaks off so he doesnt have to see the parting but then everyone runs over to see him off like bruh... They just drank juice and ate why tf did they stay overnight. Anyone that says this is a good read, their first langauge is defenitly not english. My final cringe thought that just appeared as I was remeniscing is how the mc said I will do anything to prrotect that smile, when he was looking at a nine yo girl which is once again pretty weird.

This is actually the author's first book, I read his other books and he learned his lesson and did not sexualize kids. Tbh I'm still reading it rn its pretty fun.Here's the title on webnovel;Naruto: Aokiji Yuki P.s: he does not turn into Aokiji like this novel where mc became shanks.

Good read

Review???

What the heck ?! Naruto with bleach's photo

Yes.. Because his power is from One Piece's Shanks

??????????? [system crashed]

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This is not MTL Novel

Did I say it was?

No, but in MTL Novell, this is a tradition for novelists who have a cover but the story has not been uploaded.

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